Review Detail of idle_enthusiast in The Legend of the Kyubi

Let just say it a good concept but poorly written with shallow plot other than romance that forced. Doesn't have detail explain on story and doesn't even follow the world logic. It a fanfiction in meaning of someone dream shoved into Naruto and fall apart because it forced to fit in, than a fanfic with original idea that combine with naruto. I don't know if it will become better because I'm not strong enough to read it after few chapter, so try to read and see yourself. I don't really about the morality of fanfic some comments say pedo or whatever after all it a fanfic but bad is bad not for content morality but from the story.