What I like about the story is that it isn't cookie-cutter powerful MC that knows all, sees all, can do all. It's likable and interesting with the threat of the unknown keeping the character off balance. The storyline is engaging, and I enjoy reading the interactions between the characters so far. If you have the ability, I would recommend finding an editor for your work to give it that extra 'polish' and make it easier to digest. All in all, definitely a good read. Keep it up, dear author!
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