Review Detail of PoppyQueen in SLITHERING MY WAY TO HEAVENS

Item: SLITHERING MY WAY TO HEAVENS
Rating: 4.4

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PoppyQueenLv44yrPoppyQueen

So far so good. The grammar is to the point, has no blaring errors. The flow is consistent and very well paced. The only thing that broke off the attention was the overused system messages, seemed a lil redundant. Overall a good read and definitely recommendable.

SLITHERING MY WAY TO HEAVENS

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Kalki_AvatarAuthorKalki_Avatar

Thanks for the review. Yes, at the initial chaps I had to do it... To give a headstart to the system...so as to make informative chaps...as less as possible.

4yr