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Review Detail of SiLee in You Are Mine (English)

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SiLee
SiLeeLv143yrSiLee

Overall storyline is ok but need to improve on grammatical errors. Find it a bit long winded and with too many chapters. However looking forward to more stories from author.

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You Are Mine (English)

AnnaShannel_Lin

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AnnaShannel_Lin
AnnaShannel_LinAuthorAnnaShannel_Lin

Thanks for the generous review my love, this has been the first book I've written and never proof read any of my works. I supposed to upload the edited version but system has restricted it, so I just let this one be it.

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AnnaShannel_LinAuthorAnnaShannel_Lin

You can check my profile and click original works and those books that I currently uploaded were there, some of it are also completed