Review Detail of Scarlit_Rose in Love Is Just Impossible For This Goddess Of Hell

I have to say I was confused about what was going on in the first few chapters and it didn't get any better past chapter 5, your descriptive which is good but you need to use better words and rearrange them around, the characters arc is good but need some working on. I would say go back and rewrite the chapters and read other people novels to gain experience to make your novel better.