Review Detail of Azurax in Epic of Caterpillar

This is one of the few stories that let me vivifly dive into a new world. It feels alive and the charachters are all great! It is like I can see the story while reeding. If it wasn't for the few grammatical VERY REPETETETIVE mistakes, f.e. constantly having "in" and "on" in the wrong places, it would be an absolute masterpiece, but even though it has these mistakes, the writing is wonderful! I can say one thing: Read it! You won't regret it!