Review Detail of Darkly5 in THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

Item: THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER
Rating: 2.8

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Darkly5Lv133yrDarkly5

Im sorry if I sound like a bad guy but this story needs some serious work on its grammar and also story, like it says it passes a whole week instantly Without giving much clue as too what happened. It instantly transfers to him adventuring without giving much explanation. Basically the story loses its interest very quickly due to how its written and doesnt sound well thought out.

THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

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hartpelerLv10hartpeler

the grammar is still pretty readable for me. but the punctuation had to be work into the serious audit to be honest.

3yr

Javier_BaamondeLv1Javier_Baamonde

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hartpeler:the grammar is still pretty readable for me. but the punctuation had to be work into the serious audit to be honest.

3yr