Review Detail of Koroma in THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

Item: THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER
Rating: 1

Review detail

KoromaLv43yrKoroma

This is one of, if not, the worst thing I have ever read. First off, the MCs name. I know it seems like I'm nitpicking, but really? His actual name is Shadowslash? That is literally the first name that pops into my mind when i think ****ty Sonic the Hedgehog OC. Secondly, the total lack of grammatical anything. If you came here expecting a story with basic things such as punctuation, well sorry to say but you're **** outta luck. Misspellings are also very common. Thirdly, the plot. It's a very generic isekai monster reincarnation. On top of being very generic it's also very forced. Things happen because the plot needs to progress, so don't expect fantastical things such as common sense or logic. Finally, the style. It's dead and dry. Things happen so quickly you could blink and miss it (e.g., he went to the forest to hunt and then he came back). The dialogue (and monologue) is emotionless (e.g., "I found this piece of monster meat but I didn't kill it" "Ok"). Also, you should never use abbreviations such as OMG in a novel as it breaks the flow of story and just plainly looks wierd.

THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

SHADOWSLASH

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Replies13

mistermoonLv3mistermoon

just because you don't like it does not mean others don't if you can't at least tell people to try it you are just making it so no one reads this novel

3yr

BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

hahahaha shadowslash. lmao, was checking the reviews cuz of the low rating, but this is what will make me not even try this novel. ahahaha shadowslash

3yr

OtherworldlyEggyLv3OtherworldlyEggy

Bruh youre expecting a person that didnt like the novel to actuallY reccomend it? Have you gone dumb or something anyway the point of a review is to point out negative and positive point in a novel

mistermoon:just because you don't like it does not mean others don't if you can't at least tell people to try it you are just making it so no one reads this novel

3yr

FilledWithHopeLv5FilledWithHope

Every negative review has idiots like this.

mistermoon:just because you don't like it does not mean others don't if you can't at least tell people to try it you are just making it so no one reads this novel

3yr

MR_BackStabberLv1MR_BackStabber

please read monster integration you will die overnight

3yr

ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

the review is completely right and it's just bad

mistermoon:just because you don't like it does not mean others don't if you can't at least tell people to try it you are just making it so no one reads this novel

3yr

CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

You know when to drop a novel when the comment section is more interesting.

3yr

thebackofshirtLv14thebackofshirt

Is it bad?

MR_BackStabber:please read monster integration you will die overnight

2yr

MR_BackStabberLv1MR_BackStabber

man oh man!! he wrote bandits for bandages . I don't know what to say

thebackofshirt:Is it bad?

2yr

tatsuya_K_O_ALv13tatsuya_K_O_A

luckily I ran before I died 😅 I really thought it would be something great but bruh no no no it's one of the worse out there. its been a year or 2 sinds I tried to read it.

MR_BackStabber:please read monster integration you will die overnight

2yr

OtherworldlyEggyLv3OtherworldlyEggy

Dont ppl have a brain to judge by themselves ? Im just weiting what i think

mistermoon:just because you don't like it does not mean others don't if you can't at least tell people to try it you are just making it so no one reads this novel

2yr

VhokLv12Vhok

shadowslash? ok glad i didn't bother trying this.

1yr

origin_sethLv4origin_seth

ah, thanks, tou save me..

1yr