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Lord_Cthulhu
Lord_CthulhuLv44yrLord_Cthulhu

A funny and cool novel, it is very well written and does not have so many grammar mistakes. I love the name of the skeleton, I just hope it has incest. *Wink* *wink* ;)

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THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

SHADOWSLASH

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SHADOWSLASH
SHADOWSLASHAuthorSHADOWSLASH

You will know in the future *Wink* *wink*

Lord_Cthulhu
Lord_CthulhuLv4Lord_Cthulhu

Ok ;D *Wink* *Wink*

SHADOWSLASH:You will know in the future *Wink* *wink*
Tyuiopquark
TyuiopquarkLv4Tyuiopquark

There is absolutely no punctuation. How can you claim decent grammar? It only doesn’t have many spelling mistakes. Grammar and spelling are two different things, please don’t confuse them.

Lord_Cthulhu
Lord_CthulhuLv4Lord_Cthulhu

No me Importa, Sinceramente es Difícil Encontrar Novelas como esta Hoy en Dia. No es Fácil Publicar una Novela Original y te Pregunto ¿Serias Capaz de Hacer una Historia sin Errores y ninguna Falta Ortográfica siendo Solo un Escritor Novato?

Tyuiopquark:There is absolutely no punctuation. How can you claim decent grammar? It only doesn’t have many spelling mistakes. Grammar and spelling are two different things, please don’t confuse them.
Lord_Cthulhu
Lord_CthulhuLv4Lord_Cthulhu

Valoro el que se Esfuerce en Al Menos Escribir una Historia que no Solo es Divertida sino que muy Interesante ¿Y que si no Escribió Comas y Puntos? Somos Seres Humanos y Podemos Cometer desde el Error mas Estúpido hasta un Error que Podría Acabar con tu Amistad con Alguien.

Tyuiopquark:There is absolutely no punctuation. How can you claim decent grammar? It only doesn’t have many spelling mistakes. Grammar and spelling are two different things, please don’t confuse them.
Cliff_Sama
Cliff_SamaLv4Cliff_Sama

This has a ton of grammar mistakes.

DiligentObserver
DiligentObserverLv15DiligentObserver

You know I think it depends who it's with i've thought for a long time and realised everything, EVERYTHING, is based on perception wether you wonder if something is wrong or right? It's based on your perception of wether it's wrong or right and now to the number one unsolved question.. what happens after someone die's and the only thing I can conclude is, whatever you think, whatever you think will happen will probably happenalmost everything in the world has atleast a small peice of connection to perception.. This is too much philosophical bull**** for a reading website huh. Well whatever you think is what will happen i guess whats your perception on my theory jk i don't like getting comments and don't think anyone else's theory is right so i don't care about your theory.

DiligentObserver
DiligentObserverLv15DiligentObserver

You know I think it depends who it's with i've thought for a long time and realised everything, EVERYTHING, is based on perception wether you wonder if something is wrong or right? It's based on your perception of wether it's wrong or right and now to the number one unsolved question.. what happens after someone die's and the only thing I can conclude is, whatever you think, whatever you think will happen will probably happenalmost everything in the world has atleast a small peice of connection to perception.. This is too much philosophical bull**** for a reading website huh. Well whatever you think is what will happen i guess whats your perception on my theory jk i don't like getting comments and don't think anyone else's theory is right so i don't care about your theory.

Josephmemes
JosephmemesLv2Josephmemes

Disgusting

Hati_3317
Hati_3317Lv4Hati_3317

i don't think you understand the point of reviews. you don't give "pity points" just because "the author tried". this is one of the reasons most stories on webnovel are so boosted in ratings ffs

Lord_Cthulhu:Valoro el que se Esfuerce en Al Menos Escribir una Historia que no Solo es Divertida sino que muy Interesante ¿Y que si no Escribió Comas y Puntos? Somos Seres Humanos y Podemos Cometer desde el Error mas Estúpido hasta un Error que Podría Acabar con tu Amistad con Alguien.
Genezis
GenezisLv6Genezis

Why don't just call this jib something akin Spatial Monster King, spatial akin Space Monster as monster king as title to dominate other weaker monsters

DreadHead_Novelist
DreadHead_NovelistLv4DreadHead_Novelist

Wtf would you like to uave *** with your sibling

Shamir_Rimal
Shamir_RimalLv11Shamir_Rimal

romance?

GodKingFinal
GodKingFinalLv13GodKingFinal

wtf... dont have many grammar mistake? how the hell did u read?

Eloen
EloenLv2Eloen

eww

SHADOWSLASH
SHADOWSLASHAuthorSHADOWSLASH

Btw I am going to make the story more game like as their skills would have change to fit the game like surface.

Yaboii_Boyka
Yaboii_BoykaLv4Yaboii_Boyka

nah imma go sniff some coke

DiligentObserver:You know I think it depends who it's with i've thought for a long time and realised everything, EVERYTHING, is based on perception wether you wonder if something is wrong or right? It's based on your perception of wether it's wrong or right and now to the number one unsolved question.. what happens after someone die's and the only thing I can conclude is, whatever you think, whatever you think will happen will probably happenalmost everything in the world has atleast a small peice of connection to perception.. This is too much philosophical bull**** for a reading website huh. Well whatever you think is what will happen i guess whats your perception on my theory jk i don't like getting comments and don't think anyone else's theory is right so i don't care about your theory.
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13MILARCH

what is the meaning of sans ?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv5Demiurge_Ohara

means without or nonexistent .

MILARCH:what is the meaning of sans ?
Modern_Assassin
Modern_AssassinLv14Modern_Assassin

Fellow daoist SHADOWSLASH, please fix the blatant grammar errors in your story. you've got a great idea here but the grammar stands in it's way. Frankly the grammar is going to push new readers away and even dedicated readers will eventually get tired of it. Appreciate the story.

SHADOWSLASH:Btw I am going to make the story more game like as their skills would have change to fit the game like surface.