0w0 I felt really bad that a nice story like this was sitting here rotting with no reviews, so I rated it! 1. Writing quality is really good (as stated above) 2. Stability of updates is good, if you count out the occasional few day gap. 3. Story development is ok, but I think you can do better 4. Character design is a hard one, but I personally like the ring & stuff so yeah. 5. I don't even know what the hell is world background, so no comments on that.
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LIKEAnthonyCerbic:"Writing quality is really good" NO IT ISN'T The English is understandable, but obviously broken. It is very visible past the initial chapters. Phrasing is odd, especially in dialogues. Like a poorly translated novel.