The ring is the MC and the hero is (insert wearer here). So far plot is nice and original, which is refreshing for me. The quality of writing kinda skips dialogue and jumps into chase explained the situation to X(can’t be named). Other than that I find the buying point is the plot of a ring (supporting the) hero and how the MC interacts with the world around him (or the system). I also want to further comment on.... E X P Had to do it. That was not a comment Good luck author for however your directions lead you.
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