Review Detail of Nyanodesu in Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples

Really quite nice. The writing quality is good for the most part, only having some occasional errors. Updates are regular, about once or twice per day usually. The story development leaves much to be desired though, but this isn't really a story-driven novel, and I'd much rather read about some more "plot", so it works out in the end. The characters are engaging and interesting, but I'd like to learn a bit more about them and their ideals. Not much has been said about them other than some surface-level stuff, but I guess that can come later on since there aren't that many chapters out currently. The world background is nice, though the cultivation system is a bit basic so far. I'd like to see it expanded on and improved. Overall, pretty good stuff with a nice "plot". TLDR; Writing quality: 4/5 (Only some occasional errors) Stability of updates: 5/5 (Usually one chapter per day, sometimes two) Story development: 3/5 (More "plot" than plot.) Character design: 4/5 (Only surface-level information is given about the main characters, but that could change later on.) World background: 3/5 (Cultivation system is a bit too basic and boring.)