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Yorky_Man
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The novel started of decently and got better as it progressed,until it started to focus on the character "selina" and her food habits. the novel now focuses more on food then the actual story line. its quite disappointing as it could have been a great novel.

Super Detective in the Fictional World

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You mean the king crab or something like that? Not really, it only covered about 2 chapters and its not even the focus of the chapters