Review Detail of Sayde_Jade in To revolt

I’m not a great writer but I thought I’d give this a shot please just give me feedback and I will listen Hbbhhghfhfhhdjdjfjjfjfhdnfhhfjehfhhrhdhhdhdhhdhrhfhdhhdhdhdhhdhfhhf The overall goal is to revolt and the fact is that it is not going to be a peachy perfect book