Review Detail of Lil_vy in MY ONLY LOVE I : SHIP DREAM

Short story and no chapter is locked :) story idea is good. Hard working and always thrive to improve young man with dreams. Like the ML. But FL is out of the league. Too pampered, childish and immature at all despite the ups and downs in life. Lucky is she. Clever?? Can't see it. She does not even try to be independent at all. Would say rather short minded. Story flow can be improved. It like more to read an essay rather than novel here. Like your other work much better, author.