Review Detail of the_architect_666 in My Dragon System

I found this book really interesting. it's overall development of the story is superb however, I found that maybe you could lengthen the story more as the story actually ends at a face pace. the ending could actually have some improvements. I found that the epilogue is quite confusing as it leaves many questions unanswered. For example: What happened to Ray? Did he die or something? What about his family and friends?. overall, it is still a very great job and I would give great reviews for that.😘😍😍😍👍👍👍