Review Detail of RedTorero in My Dragon System

Story not bad, but for god's sake, characters in many situations are too stupid. Even smart ones do something like "we can tell everyone that we go to a suspicious place, but why should we? They will panic when they can't find us. And we can easily reply to the messages, but noooo, we don't want to, it's too easy. If we reply, no one will die and get hurt." Grammar sometimes so bad, that I start to forget how to write and my eyes won't stop bleeding.