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not the worst, not the best either... not 1, not 2, not 3 but 4 timeskips in the first 50 chapters. characters are a disjointed mess, and the worldbuilding is a mess at best.... come on no one would train their 2 year old child with edged weapons. Hell i recieved my first dagger at 8. I mean the mc can't even hold a spoon by his own admission and you are giving him a shortsword? you know that a normal dagger for a grown man made out of steel weighs upto a killogram, right? Forget fighting, an 8 year old couldn't lift a shortsword let alone fight with it. I know it is a fantasy world but come on...

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