Review Detail of El_Shadi in My Dragon System

I don't know whether or not this is the author's first book or if they have lots of experience. I wouldn't necessarily say this book is bad. Because the concept is actually very good. And if this is the author's first or one of their first books, then they did a fantastic job. And I would tell them to keep writing. However there were some parts of this novel that I myself did not enjoy. And I frankly felt did not make sense. The mc, an old and experienced dragon, was reborn as a child. Makes sense how he acts and all that in the first half of the chapters. However then his father got sick and the book went down hill from there. The knight academy he went to for 10 years felt so forced. It was just an excuse for a time skip. And a terrible one at that seeing as he did not grow stronger at all in those 10 years EVEN THO he was supposed to be doing it to find the cure for his dad. Then, he finally leaves and goes to another academy where he hides his strength and all that. Here is where things get confusing for me. He has killed intermediate beasts before. That's a fact. And we were also told that average knights would not be able to defeat an intermediate beast . Ok. But then he enters a school and gets beat up by a second-year student who would technically only be 16. So, this 16 year old is better than all average knights? Ok, he must be the best of the best. Nope. Rank 50. And the match wasn't even close. Honestly, they're trying to make him struggle, which I understand, but they're focusing more on the physical struggle than the mental struggle which I believe is a mistake. as a former dragon even if he does not have magic in this current body he has been given the tools which would allow him to rule over everyone else quite easily if he would stop being forced to waste away his time in the academy learning almost nothing. To make up for his incredible skills, the author could have given him a greater mental and emotional struggle. The struggle between the mind of a beast in the heart of the human. Idk, there's honestly a lot of good concepts in this novel however I'm going to have to drop it because I just don't wanna read any more of a novel where the mc is forced to be weak when there is a clear path to strength. Keep trying Mr./Miss Author