Review Detail of kold6tolv in My Dragon System

The story is kind of good, but the quality of the writing has made me not want to continue reading. There are several grammatical mistakes each chapter, and the author often does things in sentences such as "He also had black scales as well". The background of the story is also somewhat annoying, especially considering the main character is supposed to be the incarnation of the strongest dragon, but he knows nothing about the world. Not how to practise ki, not that monstors have cores nada nothing. The story itself also has a habit of jumping around in the action, where often you go from one thing to another very quickly, and it's up to the reader to figure out what is going on. So the story itself has potential, but the grammatical errors, the weak backstory and the jumping in action leaves me wanting to stop reading.