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Review Detail of ClaireYsabella in My Dragon System

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ClaireYsabella
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This is a different and unique take on the classic dragon story, as you can probably glean from the title. And the author wastes no time--you're immediately plunged into what can be considered a dragon's existential dilemma: what happens if the predator suddenly becomes reborn as its usual prey? There are some punctuation and capitalization errors tht I hope the author can polish, but if you can get past that, this is an entertaining story. I also like the humor--the baby's seemingly innocent behavior and antics turn out to be actually the dragon's "rebellion". And that's only for starters. Currently, the pacing is fast, so I'm intrigued where the entire tale would lead to. Can't wait!

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My Dragon System

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CeeCeeYasuko
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I agree with you

Mortenlor
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Mortenlor
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AustinSargent
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Sounds interesting

moodycrowl
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Can you please check my novel "Rise of Void Dragons"? It'll be good if you like it and vote for it as it's participating in WPC.

Cliff_01
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Same thoughts here

Alex_T_9640
Alex_T_9640Lv2Alex_T_9640

interesting

cod_Ortega
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gud

Monisola_Adedokun
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Same thought

Orange_Jo
Orange_JoLv14Orange_Jo

Its minor errors so i dont really mind also im not sure if this is written in English or translated so this book is exceptional and i cant wait for the other entries in the series to be done

Khubaib_Tambe
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At last this novel has a connection with My Vampire Diaries, hooraay!

1magreat_man
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can any one read my book it's bootiful.

Deku_Deku_3204
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Get hit with the unlucky

moodycrowl:Can you please check my novel "Rise of Void Dragons"? It'll be good if you like it and vote for it as it's participating in WPC.
Iron_Man_3000
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Then why rated five stars… I can understand a 4-4.5 stars if there were punctuation issues… Not a full 5 ever… unless it was done by a seasoned author and editor and a fluent translator

DaoistHcMiNg
DaoistHcMiNgLv1DaoistHcMiNg

Alright