Hello! New reader here. First of all, I would like to say this novel got me hooked. It's a hidden gem for those, like me, appreciate a fantasy story. And it's certainly a good-paced BL. Well, in my opinion, one of the most interesting things in this story is the worldbuilding. The language, the provinces, the whole Celestial and Chosen One bound... It's pleasant to read and understand this incredible world the author created little by little. The characters are amazingly built, specially the Marín characters. They have their own personalities, stories, ambitions and traumas (well, I can say they really had a ****ty life). The point here is that they keep loyal to who they are throughout the story. They don't change out of the blue, like magic. The changes they go through are well-developed and make sense. The writing is also good regarding grammar and description. I can say I really enjoy the way the author writes. I didn't comment on the chapters, but I did appreciate the story and felt like a had to write this review. And of course I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapters! Dear author, thank you for your hard work in this story. I know sometimes it's not easy to keep writing as you have naturally busy moments, but I also know you do your best. I could see It through the chapters. Lastly, suming it up: this story is really worth the read. ☺️
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