Review Detail of Xerx_Lugner in Birthrights

A pretty interesting story that has no updates and is slowly killing itself due to the inactivity by the author. I am sorry for the bad review but let me give you some advice. 1. PROOFREAD. This series needs a good proofreader who can fix the grammar and sentence structure because it horrible in some parts the story. Get a good friend and then try to go through the story. 2. I am hopeful about this one but the story is still a highschool one (internally sighs). I hope the author creates vibrant characters that are NOT cliche. Especially the female ones since they are the most rushed and overlooked ones. 3. Please keep the romance realistic as possible. PLEASE!