God damn the English sucks. Like it's really bad. I can't express it enough. It's comical at times how painful it is reading broken English. In addition, the autocorrect is awful as well. It's fucks up so many words and makes the verbiage absolutely horrible. Once past the broken English, however, the story is actually of great quality. The characters are great and it is a very interesting and different take on the Naruto world. It was kind of disappointing that Might Guy was changed into a girl but oh well. If you could get an editor or try to improve your English by actually proof reading what you upload, it would be so much better. Thanks for the great story!
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