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Review Detail of Rayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy in Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?

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Rayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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I'll be completely honest. The story is quite good, but it's extremely hard to read. There are next to no comma usage and the author continues a sentence for an entire paragraph without using a period. If you don't mind this, then go ahead and read this.

Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?

cier_Tempest

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Rayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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You're welcome😑👍

cier_Tempest:Thanks for the review 😑👍
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cier_Tempest
cier_TempestAuthorcier_Tempest

Thanks for the review 😑👍

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RiJU
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If what the reviewer says is right, then you should try to get a editor if possible to fix these issues. [img=fp]

cier_Tempest:Thanks for the review 😑👍
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