Review Detail of Nemesis_T103 in The Oracle Paths
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I think the novel is pretty good, the story is moving smoothly, but there are some things that I noticed. The way characters are developed is very miniscule, most characters are simply there with no motive or background, even some of the mc's close friends are lacking in mindsets. I'm not asking for a 200 chapter arc that develops these characters but a one man short story that develops the character and allows an interests in them. The ordeals are well done, but the exploration on B842 is lacking. That's quite scary considering that B842 is the main planet that MC lives on and seems to be a point of interest that will stay for the novel. That might change as we go through the novel. Interesting story though. *Spoilers Ahead* Not a fan of this Kyle's sister arc though. Bhuzkec is developing into a main villain of the arc but I just abhore reading about him. Like as an interesting villain, he just isn't fun or unique to read about. I hope he doesn't live longer than the arc and that Kyle's sister isn't a victim of Stockholm Syndrome as I think she might be.
The Oracle Paths
Arkinslize
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Thanks for your review. Stockholm syndrome is not my kink and Bhuzkoc is at best a mini boss. For the rest, some readers gave me these critics too about side characters but that's the drawbacks of following Jake and see everything under its angle. Imo, there's still a lot happening and every character of the support cast went through some changes in a way or another. I could focus on them and give them more screen time, but it slows down the pace of the story accordingly. I'll do it eventually as this novel won't be a short one anyway.
você realmente deveria focar mais em B842, os calvários estão bem chatos e longos, você deveria criar um intervalo obrigatório entre os calvários de nível superior, essa coisa de poder participar deles todos os dias é muito limitante e irracional. que estraga o desenvolvimento de outros lados da história
Arkinslize:Thanks for your review. Stockholm syndrome is not my kink and Bhuzkoc is at best a mini boss. For the rest, some readers gave me these critics too about side characters but that's the drawbacks of following Jake and see everything under its angle. Imo, there's still a lot happening and every character of the support cast went through some changes in a way or another. I could focus on them and give them more screen time, but it slows down the pace of the story accordingly. I'll do it eventually as this novel won't be a short one anyway.