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Marcelozam
MarcelozamLv43yrMarcelozam

Total score 4.8/5.0 Novel's just really good and has a lot of potential. I would say the only problems are the slow start that saddly feels like an info dump and the release rate of 1 ch per day (wich is kinda personal). The first few chapters aren't that enjoyable but still very good after reading them I felt situated, I felt like I understood how that world works, but some of the chapters were kinda boring... Writing quality: it's pretty good, I rarely find mistakes and if I do they aren't pace breaking typos. 5/5 Stability of updates: 1 ch per day sometimes the author misses the chapters but makes double releases in the next days. 4/5 (bcuz I'm greedy and want to see 2-3 ch per day). SPOILER ZONE - BE WARNED - -------------------- / / -------------------- Story development: It's good until now. I'm a bit worried on the direction it's following bcuz the red cube thingy kinda annoys me. It was the MC's first red cube but there where some ppl like the Asian Chick (forgot the name something Yang I think) that had higher ranks than the MC wich I find kinda doubtfull after all if you follow the scale she would need 10 million points (xp) to get from rank 3 to rank 4 and it's kinda hard to believe that some1 got that ammount of xp in the 4-5 months that they had the oracle. I would believe some1 being a rank 4 if they were one of the first ones being teleported to planet 'B-numbers' but since she was way weaker than the protagonist it's kinda hard to believe that she was one of the first ones. Idk the ranking thing kinda bothers me, I believe the red cube should have more restraints at least in the tutorial after all one of the guys that entered planet 'B-numbers' during the first invasion of the digestors (22 years ago) could just enter the first ordeal and kill every1 and It would probably ruin the tutorial for those ppl as long as it's his first ordeal he would be sent to the same world after all. 5/5 tho I was just ranting... srry bout that. **¹: Please make some reasonable explanations as to why Ruby's team is so strong during their first ordeal. It doesn't really make sense, I feel like the protagonist did his best with the time he had and knowing that there's a lot of ppl that are stronger than him that had the same ammount of time kinda bothers me. If it was just Ruby it would make sense after all she could have absorved all the Aether or something but an entire team is kinda hard to get... **²: If possible create some rules to restrain the entrance of players in the next few ordeals. If some rank 7 guy that never did an ordeal and was just getting stronger by killing digestors decides to enter his first ordeal and kill every1 inside it would kinda ruin it... Knowing that the oracle encourage murder if you're a psycho I don't think it's hard to believe that some1 would do that... If you kill an entire world of ppl you're still getting stronger after all... Character design: I like the protagonist. His personnality is not defined yet, sometimes he feels like a goody two shoes and sometimes he's merciless, the personality is constantly evolving tho. The asian chick can prove that hehe. 5/5. **: I don't like Ruby, peace. World background: We don't know much about the mirror world but it's still interesting. I'm waiting for more information about the new planet tho, hope there'll be some exploration in the next arc. Well, I feel like I have ranted enough. Thank you all for reading and srry for the language mistakes that I commited during this review!

The Oracle Paths

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Marcelozam
MarcelozamLv4Marcelozam

In these times of fake reviews and authors deleting negative reviews. I feel glad for actually finding a good underrated novel

Arkinslize
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Thanks for your review. :) I think that I already gave quite a few hints about how players can be so strong during their first Ordeal despite the fact Jake only joined B842 a few days ago. The Trial Worlds VR game is one reason, but the second one much more obvious and hinted in volume 1: Earth didn't disappear all at once. So naturally some people have been brought away earlier. A rank 7 wouldn't be able to do this. First, because the Oracle doesn't promote killing between players and second because the Ordeal must be hard. That's why Ruby and co were on a battlefront while Jake was just training.

Marcelozam:In these times of fake reviews and authors deleting negative reviews. I feel glad for actually finding a good underrated novel
Marcelozam
MarcelozamLv4Marcelozam

Hmmmm, that makes sense. Ty for the answers!

Arkinslize:Thanks for your review. :) I think that I already gave quite a few hints about how players can be so strong during their first Ordeal despite the fact Jake only joined B842 a few days ago. The Trial Worlds VR game is one reason, but the second one much more obvious and hinted in volume 1: Earth didn't disappear all at once. So naturally some people have been brought away earlier. A rank 7 wouldn't be able to do this. First, because the Oracle doesn't promote killing between players and second because the Ordeal must be hard. That's why Ruby and co were on a battlefront while Jake was just training.