This is my 2nd review and I still have to say it is simply amazing, author, all I'm going to say right now is that can u increase the pace of the story, I can see a little time-skip coming after he fights, but at this rate, when he enters the 4th trial ordeal, I feel like this will be like on its 250th chapter, I feel like you should try to up the pace so there is more expansion in the world. Thats all i'm saying, so i'm just asking how will the pacing of the story go?
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