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The author of this story is new to writing. I can only deduce that he is also very very young. The grammar in this story, lack of punctuation, walls of text and chaotic writing is worse than the majority of authors who get their fic dropped due to the terrible formatting and grammar they used. Which is why I drop it as well. The story simply isn't legible with the complete lack of formatting, grammar and paragraphs. I unfortunately cannot accurately rate the quality of the story because I simply could not read it due to how it was written... To the author... I encourage you to keep on writing but do so to work on these issues. Writing out your stories is a great way to practice your writing skills but you do need to do your best to format your text as you write it. Each sentence should end with a symbol. Question marks for questions, exclamation marks for yelling, points... For breaks and a single point to end a sentence. Don't group more than three sentences in a single paragraph. If you do, your text is not legible to people with dyslexia. Don't shorten your words to slang like sum for something. Very few people outside the sphere of influence that you are in will make such a connection. Storytelling / Writing is an international. It pans across generations. As such it pays to put the effort into making it legible for all. I'm a millennial, your probably one of the next gen kids judging by how you use your words: work this and your story will be lit. Sincerely, Canaan