Review Detail of FatboyPat in Child of Destiny
Review detail
I have to disagree with basically every other review I’ve seen on here. This is the firdt book I’ve started on this app and the quality of the writing is absolute trash. The most basic rule of storytelling; “show don’t tell,” is completely ignored. Every last bit of nuance has been stripped from the story and the author clearly tries to make up for it with cheesy scenes designed to be hard hitting. I’m sure the story is ok, but whoever the author is needs a ghost writer desperately. I’m amazed anyone has made it through a book I’d expect to see in a middle school English class.
Child of Destiny
ProudMonkey
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ProudMonkey:Hahahahah...... It might be a good review if you are at least in the middle chapters but alas, you are in in the first chappie mate.... Do you honestly believe we can't see your reading status?
I already have the major outline for the next one, but I can't properly write it in the moment since I still have a lot of things that I need to do on my side.
jakiro12:lods my balak k b gumawa ng ibang novel???
ProudMonkey:I already have the major outline for the next one, but I can't properly write it in the moment since I still have a lot of things that I need to do on my side.