Review Detail of Toha_Riku in Life line of the Intelligent foe

Item: Life line of the Intelligent foe
Rating: 3.6

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Toha_RikuLv24yrToha_Riku

It has improved a lot. Great job. But i do hope you make chapters atleast 4 pages long so it's not like a short story but it's really good . It just needs details and hard work! Good job man.

Life line of the Intelligent foe

Tin_Jus

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Tin_JusAuthorTin_Jus

Thank you, with that mas gaganahan papo ako 143😜

4yr