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PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv44yrPotatoKeeper

I don't really like review, but i think i just write some bullsh*t here(Author is forcing me to write some review on his fanfic, please don't tell author-san my reader friend๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜) Let start review for stability of uploaded chapter. Honestly i think this fanfic have good daily upload so i give him good score here, don't force me write more about upload because i just meet writer Block here hooman. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Next about story'. I think this fanfic is unique. Just look around in fanfic section here, you can see too much about dxd, atg, Naruto, and ect. It not me hate anime or weeb but too much of them is not very logical to me, some of them having too "op" MC without hard training or just want cacth them all with pokeball, i think you know what i mean hooman. It not work if author write like that but some Entity like me maybe don't like this kind of story' so please think bit before read them and don't attack them just becuase you don't like they story' hooman. Back to my review, this fanfic have good kind story' it bit ligth for now. Story' is about lil' hooman who die in last world and transfer to new body in new world. I know some of you want say this setting is bit lame but what way you want to another world, if you have new way please write below, hehehe. ๐Ÿ˜ Next char setting. MC is good to me. He have personality, have background Story, have some goal, but He don't have woman for now. Another Chara i think for later hehehe(i bit lazy to write them hehe) And for world setting i think it to early for me on write it on this review. This fanfic have some detail world build thing for me now. So i have my review and here because my phone to laggy to write more. Sorry if this review bit annoying to you because i not write it for you hooman hahaha, oops i mean sorry if i make mistake or hurt your feeling hooman. Thank for read till here and have good time hooman๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Ben 10: marvel heroes

Purplezhz

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Purplezhz
PurplezhzAuthorPurplezhz

The author-San is read your review!!!!

PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

No no no. This is not real. This just dream. No author Will read they novel review ๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ˜ต

Purplezhz:The author-San is read your review!!!!
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

And how you read it when i hide it. You must be hacker hooman ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Purplezhz:The author-San is read your review!!!!
Purplezhz
PurplezhzAuthorPurplezhz

Jam the author of course I can read the spoilers, and that not a dream, its a nightmare๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

PotatoKeeper:And how you read it when i hide it. You must be hacker hooman ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

Nonono, but wait if you say this nightmare so i just need wake up and boom you Will gone hooman hahaha ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Me and my genius mind๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž

Purplezhz:Jam the author of course I can read the spoilers, and that not a dream, its a nightmare๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

Nonono, but wait if you say this nightmare so i just need wake up and boom you Will gone hooman hahaha ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Me and my genius mind๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž

Purplezhz:Jam the author of course I can read the spoilers, and that not a dream, its a nightmare๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Purplezhz
PurplezhzAuthorPurplezhz

Its a nightmare you can't woke up from it

PotatoKeeper:Nonono, but wait if you say this nightmare so i just need wake up and boom you Will gone hooman hahaha ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Me and my genius mind๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

No the not true. No no no, how can that be like this๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ You just author, not a God๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Give me back my freedom hooman ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ

Purplezhz:Its a nightmare you can't woke up from it
Purplezhz
PurplezhzAuthorPurplezhz

The author have the absolute power in their books. So I created a world in a book look exactly like the real world. You are just a novel character who break the fourth wall to speak to the author.

PotatoKeeper:No the not true. No no no, how can that be like this๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ You just author, not a God๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Give me back my freedom hooman ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

How can it became true hooman ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ‘ฟ You telling me i'm just Entity you have been create hooman. I'm born from hooman emotion not by you hooman ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ But if it true than where my intro to your story' hooman, explain ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Purplezhz:The author have the absolute power in their books. So I created a world in a book look exactly like the real world. You are just a novel character who break the fourth wall to speak to the author.
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

How can it became true hooman ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ‘ฟ You telling me i'm just Entity you have been create hooman. I'm born from hooman emotion not by you hooman ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ But if it true than where my intro to your story' hooman, explain ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Purplezhz:The author have the absolute power in their books. So I created a world in a book look exactly like the real world. You are just a novel character who break the fourth wall to speak to the author.
Purplezhz
PurplezhzAuthorPurplezhz

This story is just one shot and the intro is A stupid reader thinks that he was a being born from emotions.โ‚น

PotatoKeeper:How can it became true hooman ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ต๐Ÿ‘ฟ You telling me i'm just Entity you have been create hooman. I'm born from hooman emotion not by you hooman ๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ But if it true than where my intro to your story' hooman, explain ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

Damn you hooman๐Ÿ‘ฟ๐Ÿ‘ฟ Who say I'm stupid. Yeah maybe you create me, but im free from you hahaha. So i Will make trouble in you story' hehehe๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Purplezhz:This story is just one shot and the intro is A stupid reader thinks that he was a being born from emotions.โ‚น