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Review Detail of Tortul in Is that a Wisp?

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Tortul
TortulLv123yrTortul

Hmm. Rough. World building needs help, character building as well. A bit forced overall. Editing good, but needs more captivation to appeal to a larger audience.

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Is that a Wisp?

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A valid opinion. =)