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AlienTurkey9958
AlienTurkey9958Lv114yrAlienTurkey9958

The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.

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Is that a Wisp?

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Jack_Balu
Jack_BaluLv3Jack_Balu

I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

SavageGamer
SavageGamerLv13SavageGamer

Why do authors alwas destroy their story with crappy comedy.

AlienTurkey9958
AlienTurkey9958Lv11AlienTurkey9958

Yeah I've dropped quite a few stories for that reason, it just makes the story bland and forced.

SavageGamer:Why do authors alwas destroy their story with crappy comedy.
GangikaKing
GangikaKingLv10GangikaKing

To be fair the author has taken criticism from the fans and has constantly evolved his story. I believe a lot of the problems your taking about are addressed later in the story. I honestly love this story and especially how unique Krune is when compared to a typical wisp let alone a typical cultivator. The Myriad Energies technique is only one of the things that make his so different.

ClockWork746
ClockWork746Lv11ClockWork746

Which chapter old is you stop at ??

Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

The romance is more forced than the jokes for me

Jims_Rid
Jims_RidLv4Jims_Rid

You can just ignore the romance. It's not even relevant in the story after all. it's just there to give the MC a bit of a background

Daoist_Red_Reads:The romance is more forced than the jokes for me