Review Detail of underworld_Empress in One more step

The overall story development till now is good, though if there was a little bit more detail it would have been better. The characters were written well and as the book goes on they also evolve. The world development was a little slow and not very detailed though I think it will be added in the later stages. It would be better if some more detail is added to the scenes that take place, even so the writing has its own character.