It reads like getting slapped in the face by fish...the grammar is pretty damn bad. The story feels like a rip off trope of every other novel about starting poor, meeting random OP teacher, and then becoming OP. Boy is poor, boy has no family in a small village and no one will look after him, boy goes to school after working hard, boy meets girl, boy dates girl, girl cheats on him, boy flips the middle finger and says cliche "never speak to me again". Yeah...we have all read it before and there is nothing new here.
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