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Review Detail of Aevitas in Worlds' Apocalypse Online

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Aevitas
AevitasLv112yrAevitas

I have only read 9 chapters, I could not force myself to read any further. This review won't reflect the series as a whole, just what I could stomach. The translation quality is barely above machine translation level, making it very jarring to read Even if somehow you look past the translation, the framing of all the scenes is awful. Things happen with no explanation, perspectives shift out of nowhere, and it goes back and forth between present and past tense constantly. It is really hard to concentrate on the story. That leads to the final point, the story. The story is nothing special, pretty much just cookie-cutter cliche Chinese characters with as much depth as a speed bump. Cliches aren’t bad, and are often enjoyable, but not when cliches are literally every part of the story. Final statement: Don’t bother reading unless you have nothing better to do, and even then think twice.

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Ideal
IdealLv6Ideal

How do do that if I can’ even understand what’s being said in the first place???

Ay82473:I presume the first 50+ chaps to be a little trouble to read as the chapters were not edited during that time. After 100 chaps the quality should improve!
aurelien
aurelienLv6aurelien

Yeah but no, you can't say the story is bad if you've read just 9 chapters, but I find true that the first chapters are a struggle to read, but I don't find the translation bad ( well at least no later ).

Ay82473
Ay82473Lv10Ay82473

I presume the first 50+ chaps to be a little trouble to read as the chapters were not edited during that time. After 100 chaps the quality should improve!

Ay82473
Ay82473Lv10Ay82473

I have read through them and I believe that although there is a problem with the tenses it still is understandable

Ideal:How do do that if I can’ even understand what’s being said in the first place???