I liked this story for a bit, it's very original on the premise and how that premise is carried out, but the story becomes a bit messy later on. However my biggest gripe is that every antagonist that can be categorized as a group is made to be autistic, author just goes so hard on making random side antagonists as autistic as possible, whether they be guards, soldiers, nobles, members of an organisation, he makes them all as autistic and annoying as possible so we can properly hate them before the MC expresses his own annoyance and rage at their stupidity. I just don't much like a world that is 90% filled with people who don't have a brain.
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