Review Detail of Red_Sky in Demon's Virtue

I really love this story only problem is the world isnt really described to well I only know of the skyhart kingdom holy empire and some lands and even those places aren't described to Well. i know the general layout of the cities and towns but that's it. Some people like to see in depth descriptions I'm not asking for that tell me how the city feels is it vibrant or gloomy what are the people like if you use enough feeling people will have an easy time picturing what the kingdom looks like or you could give broad descriptions that give a feel are the roofs flat arched or domed. you could just look up architectural styles and see what fits your cities and towns best. Also it needs some filler to slow things down a bit it should preferably be stuff to do with the kids so they can be more fleshed out as characters I'm more connected to James then clementine please let Eiro fight people is own level hes been winning by mostly luck (not plot because he only used the tools he was given not pulling out some new power) research world building as well Ps. I'm on ch.198