I feel like parts of the story can be a bit rushed and I’m sure has it goes on more of the world and kingdoms will be explained. Over all tho I like this story a lot so far good characters and good development with the main character. There is a lot of good coincidences but most stories have them so I can’t complain to much about that over all tho I’d recommend it over most other stories I looked at on this app
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