Review Detail of Overlord_Venus in Because I simply love you

Well, concept wise, I like the story. It has a fairly engaging plot that is centered around the main character 'Nana'. Concerning about the twin-brothers, I liked the way they were portrayed. It looked like the author actually has a pair of twin brothers back at home. They were realistically depicted. Grammar: Not up to the level I would like, but it doesn't break my immersion. The way the sentences are framed, it looked like the Author, thought having a good grasp of the English language is not a person who thinks in English. It was like the Author thought in a different language and translated it into English. It is apparent in the way the sentences are formed, the way the characters talk, etc. Characters: Well, the twins were fleshed appropriately. But, as for the MC 'Nana', I would love it if she could behave in the manner she feels. Like: In a situation where she feels anger, instead of showcasing that trait, the sentences used to portray it starts with, "Humph," Using such words generally bring down the weight of the emotions. At least, I think that way. Dialogues: The dialogues spoken by the characters when in some situation are quite realistic. But, the sentences used for casual talk don't feel realistic. There might be people who talk in such a manner, but I don't know about that. Descriptions: This is one thing I found to be somewhat lacking. for example, in chapter 2: it was written as, 'Somewhere in a dark underground cell, a man sat on a throne.' But, I am actually unable to imagine what area was the scene set in, were there any other objects in the room apart from the throne, etc. "In an underground room hung a huge chandelier adorned with gems, the lamps on it emitting a pale green light. The room had black mottled walls, signs of furnishing present in some corners, the rest looking like there were a part of history. Spanning 60 meters long and 20 metres wide, the room looked vacant without any furnishing. a throne sat in its centre, made from gold. various inscriptions, forming the shapes of dragons winding up to the top, engaging with a bird that covered the farmers were inscribed. to the back hung a pair of wings made from gold, acting as the back rest. on its seat sat a man, wearing a set of loose clothes. he had black hair, green eyes matching the colour of the chandelier, and a sharp nose that looked like a eagle's beak"...something like that. For any book, background descriptions are necessary. I have only read 13 chapters, so take this statement with a grain of salt. So, at the end, despite me being able to enjoy the book, some parts gave me a feeling of lacking. Well, maybe because I generally read sci-fi and fantasy books, it made me expect the same in this book from an entirely different genre.