So far it looks ok, it looks like an RPG game story with a system. The world background looks generic but the action part looks intense and makes up for it. I do not comment about the updates since its irrelevant. The downsides is that there are just too many stories in the genre which makes it looks similar. It's too early to judge the story though... only twelve chapters have been written so far. My final verdict is that the story is unique in its own way. It is action-packed and innovative.
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