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EmpressChloe
EmpressChloeLv144yrEmpressChloe

I quite like this story so far and feel like you have a solid start, however I would look into getting an editor. While you don’t make spelling mistakes, you have made quite a few grammatical mistakes, especially when it comes to tenses. Make sure that if you use present tense you don’t switch to using past tense half way through your sentence and vice verses. Other wise, I look forward to reading this novel and I hope to see more updates in the future. Keep it up! :)

The Devil's Bride

Hani_89

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Hani_89
Hani_89AuthorHani_89

Thank u EmpressChloe for your honest review. I'm aware about it and I know I need an editor, I just don't have any idea on where to get one 😅😅😅 this is my first time writing, so I don't have any foundation in where to start. Can u give me any suggestions? Thank u 😊😊😊

4yr
Hani_89
Hani_89AuthorHani_89

Thank u EmpressChloe for your honest review. I'm aware about it and I know I need an editor, I just don't have any idea on where to get one 😅😅😅 this is my first time writing, so I don't have any foundation in where to start. Can u give me any suggestions? Thank u 😊😊😊

4yr
EmpressChloe
EmpressChloeLv14EmpressChloe

I’m not entirely sure where to get an editor either, maybe google it? However, something I do when writing is copy and paste what I’ve written into a word document. Usually word will give you suggestions to fix things if you have made any spelling or grammatical errors. I hope this helps :) you’re doing great for your first time too <3

4yr
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