This is a hidden gem. It is a really refreshing story that has a strong FL, a stubborn ML that is changing, and many mysteries to be solved (particularly, about who is it pulling the strings in the shadows). Writing Quality: There are very minor grammatical errors and it's so negligible that you wouldn't notice them. The quality is high, and the manner in which the Author manages to bring you within its story through her words is breathtaking. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: Very well paced. Not too slow or too fast. The way the Author weaves the plots and reveals the stuff bit by bit is intringuing indeed. It's far beyond the typical cliche type of plot and storyline, and for those that are similar (you know, there has to be that childhood friend/lover that clings etc), the Author manages to still make it interesting and fresh. Character Design: This is the best part of the whole novel. You can see how the MCs change and develop, especially the ML. The FL has gone through a drastic change in personality, so you don't really see the progress from the meek to the strong but you do clap your hands in glee when you see how she stands up for herself. I love how these characters develop and can't wait for more to be revealed. World Background: It's set in modern Earth, so there's not much 'world background' to speak of. However, the setting is described well, and the whole concept and plot are well written. All the best, Author! Will definitely recommend this to my readers as well.
AnnaShannel_Lin
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LIKEEnglish isn't my first language either, and I also use grammarly. To me, your novel is already perfect (hence, 5*) but I know that there are some out there who are extremely particular. So my review on the writing quality was more for those who expect perfection.
AnnaShannel_Lin:Thank you for a good review dear reader. As much as possible I tried my best to write a refreshing novel but my knowledge in English grammar is limited though I used grammarly to correct errors but still I didn't able to make it perfect....
preciousyunxi:please tell me i’m not the only person to see a blonde lee dong wook on the cover