Review Detail of Hnn17 in My Exclusive Dream World Adventures
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All the hot women in this novel should wear a mask and cover their face. Creepy mc scans the crowd and picks out the hottest woman and grabs her into his system created closed micro world. No consent from the girls it's basically a kidnapping, didn't even ask her hey you wanna come with me for 6months to a world where the silence and loneliness will drive you mental or a world where aliens will literally kill you ? What sane woman would agree ? Ok so they get pulled into this world, mc is prepared and armed to the teeth with guns and precision skill and super strength, he's got all the food and water, and this woman got nothing but the clothes in her back, now she didn't ask for any of this sh!t and knows nothing. Mc goes up and say I want you to do your share and carry half the load. Wtf! and he's got 2 guns but hogs both and leave her with literally nothing and she is 100% dependent on him for food water and protection from man eating aliens. What mc is doing is similar to those creepy psychos that kidnaps women on the street and locked them up in their basement, the women are 100% dependent on their captor for food and water and after 10-20 years have children with them. The 1st girl got mentally scarred and can't sleep without music, when mc leaves the world she suicides thinking he was dead. What girl kills herself over a guy she known for less than 6 months total, keep living girl try to find another living person. Would she kill herself if she know he was responsible for bringing her here and she's about to go back ? but he says nothing and keep her in the dark and she jumps and dream-die. As for the 2nd girl she probably develop a fear of gentle gorillas after the arc. Imo there's no romance here, these poor girls are forced here against their will and kept in the dark by mc. Romance need 2 willing people equal in power and information, here the power is all on MCs side and the girls have no options and no escape. I give this novel 50%, the translation is good but ideas and characters are terrible.
My Exclusive Dream World Adventures
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K_Out:Triggered snowflake who is illiterate, misses key plot points and misconstrues the entire work. You’re the kind of person who can confuse the Declaration of Independence with the Communist Manifesto and think the author is the same person.
you got a point, after the 1st arc, the ceo girl was looking at him strangely and goes after him to talk, should he have realised that she knows and can remember everything, so she was not npc. further more, these women goes to bed one night and the next day wake up and their brains are injected with 6 months worth of memories, one of which is her death, plus romantic feeling towards a man she never met, it's all very unnatural like she got mind-raped by mc and his system.
L_Mao:Da fuq? You missin somethin here? It was all a dream for him, and he thought that the people he is interacting with are all just npcs
hey ad hominen loser, since you brought up the communist manifesto, explain why a communist country is called a people's republic country?
K_Out:Triggered snowflake who is illiterate, misses key plot points and misconstrues the entire work. You’re the kind of person who can confuse the Declaration of Independence with the Communist Manifesto and think the author is the same person.
the punishment for ad hominen around here is i get to spiritually mindrape all your holes! have a good night sleep i will pull your mind into my system dungeon, tomorrow you will wake up with 6months worth of memories of getting ass-spanked by me, and unusual romantic feelings towards cucumbers. aka you just got the fl experience.
K_Out:Triggered snowflake who is illiterate, misses key plot points and misconstrues the entire work. You’re the kind of person who can confuse the Declaration of Independence with the Communist Manifesto and think the author is the same person.
easy, to be fair she should have access to all the mission info and access to the system shops. she goes in as equal player not mc's luggage carrier.
doulykyng:what would you do with the system? choose someone ugly or a beauty. in addition the system told him that it is just a reconstruction of reality so he could just raped her on the spot but he is a good man and he holds back.
You're quite an idealist. Why should an NPC in his point of view be given the same status as him? And even if he somehow goes with your plan, what would happen, could he convince her? Furthermore, if he shares his system benefits with an NPC, wouldn't that NPC be more of a burden than she already is? In the second dream that he had, he didn't even know nor does he have any idea that the NPC/helper he is bringing along with him is a real person. Nonetheless, he proceeded to give her protection because he only brought a beautiful NPC along because he doesn't want to be bored to death and seeks someone to accompany him. He even scrapped the idea of bringing an NPC that he knows to his dreams because it would only **** him up because for him, all that had happened in his dreams are only for him and is not shared with anyone else.
Of course he would ask the woman to do her share of the work. Is this a problem in any way? She is an NPC helper in his POV. Why should she just be protected without pulling her fair share of the problems? In addition, why should he give her a gun? A person without any prior background and doesn't even know how to properly handle a gun? Not only is that a waste of his resources, that could also lead to unforseen dangers. He doesn't even know her real nature, why should he give a complete stranger a gun that he had spent so much on?
Of course he would ask the woman to do her share of the work. Is this a problem in any way? She is an NPC helper in his POV. Why should she just be protected without pulling her fair share of the problems? In addition, why should he give her a gun? A person without any prior background and doesn't even know how to properly handle a gun? Not only is that a waste of his resources, that could also lead to unforseen dangers. He doesn't even know her real nature, why should he give a complete stranger a gun that he had spent so much on?
stupid, you should always keep information for yourself. you probably wouldn't do what you said if it happened to you. why share something like that, she has no system and the mc believes that it is an npc. you must be a 17 year old girl who believes the world is fair.
Hnn17:easy, to be fair she should have access to all the mission info and access to the system shops. she goes in as equal player not mc's luggage carrier.
they are not npc, even mc realised this after the 1st girl, he made up a rule not to pick local women again. you know the teleport theory ? the original body is vaporizes at the first teleporter and at the 2nd teleporter another exact same body is constructed. in this system world the replicated woman is the 2nd body while the original body is asleep at home. the 2nd body is the exact same one, same feelings and emotions as the real one. in her mind she is the real one. after 6months all her memories are taken out and stuffed into the original body, as far as she's concerned it actually happened to her. maybe mc is also in a replicant body and he dont know it, why should he get all the information and equips and system shops while she gets nothing when they are in the same mission?
L_Mao:You're quite an idealist. Why should an NPC in his point of view be given the same status as him? And even if he somehow goes with your plan, what would happen, could he convince her? Furthermore, if he shares his system benefits with an NPC, wouldn't that NPC be more of a burden than she already is? In the second dream that he had, he didn't even know nor does he have any idea that the NPC/helper he is bringing along with him is a real person. Nonetheless, he proceeded to give her protection because he only brought a beautiful NPC along because he doesn't want to be bored to death and seeks someone to accompany him. He even scrapped the idea of bringing an NPC that he knows to his dreams because it would only **** him up because for him, all that had happened in his dreams are only for him and is not shared with anyone else.
stupider, who say he should reveal everything, keep the system a secret, tell her its a dream world that will ends in 6 months and give her hope to live on. i rather be a light in the darkness than p!ss all over the seat
doulykyng:stupid, you should always keep information for yourself. you probably wouldn't do what you said if it happened to you. why share something like that, she has no system and the mc believes that it is an npc. you must be a 17 year old girl who believes the world is fair.
Read again. He never realized that the first woman he brought into the dream connected to her real counterpart. The only thing he found strange was that she had a tomato plant in her office. He made the rule not to bring any acquaintances because it will **** him up because all that would happen in the dream would only be experienced by himself. Making deep connection with an exact copy of his acquaintance IRL would only put false impressions in him. He even restrained himself in front of the first woman he copied when he met her after the first dream because he had already developed feelings for her.
Hnn17:they are not npc, even mc realised this after the 1st girl, he made up a rule not to pick local women again. you know the teleport theory ? the original body is vaporizes at the first teleporter and at the 2nd teleporter another exact same body is constructed. in this system world the replicated woman is the 2nd body while the original body is asleep at home. the 2nd body is the exact same one, same feelings and emotions as the real one. in her mind she is the real one. after 6months all her memories are taken out and stuffed into the original body, as far as she's concerned it actually happened to her. maybe mc is also in a replicant body and he dont know it, why should he get all the information and equips and system shops while she gets nothing when they are in the same mission?
waste of resources ? c'mon mc panicked and wasted a whole ammo clip on 1 alien. you think its fair for him to have 2 guns, all bullets, exo arm with super strength and all the food and water. and she got a green dress and shoes and that its - unarmed against numerous green gorilla aliens? she dont even have access to the shops to buy her own guns, my review stands, this poor girl have no power in the relationship, no romance here.
L_Mao:Of course he would ask the woman to do her share of the work. Is this a problem in any way? She is an NPC helper in his POV. Why should she just be protected without pulling her fair share of the problems? In addition, why should he give her a gun? A person without any prior background and doesn't even know how to properly handle a gun? Not only is that a waste of his resources, that could also lead to unforseen dangers. He doesn't even know her real nature, why should he give a complete stranger a gun that he had spent so much on?
Do you think how fucking stupid that sounds? Would anyone fucking believe him? He would be treated as a psycho the moment he does something like that. And even if he convinced her it was a dream, then what? She might have unnecessary reaction to it, what if she just goes around fucking everything up because for her it was a 'dream', and she would not suffer any consequences to whatever she do in the dream. If something detrimental happened because of the 'helper' he brought, the MC would be the once suffering, not the helper.
Hnn17:stupider, who say he should reveal everything, keep the system a secret, tell her its a dream world that will ends in 6 months and give her hope to live on. i rather be a light in the darkness than p!ss all over the seat
Yes it is fair. He was the one who bought all of those things, why should he share them? Is she somehow entitled to those resources? Is she somehow entitled to his protection without even helping?
Hnn17:waste of resources ? c'mon mc panicked and wasted a whole ammo clip on 1 alien. you think its fair for him to have 2 guns, all bullets, exo arm with super strength and all the food and water. and she got a green dress and shoes and that its - unarmed against numerous green gorilla aliens? she dont even have access to the shops to buy her own guns, my review stands, this poor girl have no power in the relationship, no romance here.
my review covers the entire 60 chapters, covers both his and the 2 girls perspectives. i read the 1st girl experiences and she remembers everything in the mission, and she got the short end of the stick. mc had a great time, she didnt. she and mc are both characters in the mission. mcs view: its a mission, this woman is an npc lets use her. her view: she was at home, now she's in a strange land with no way out and it might last forever, theres 1 guy left and we got together but now hes dying and ill be alone forever. why should only mc's view and perspective be valid to readers while she and hers is disregarded ? romance needs 2 and that wasnt romance.
L_Mao:Read again. He never realized that the first woman he brought into the dream connected to her real counterpart. The only thing he found strange was that she had a tomato plant in her office. He made the rule not to bring any acquaintances because it will **** him up because all that would happen in the dream would only be experienced by himself. Making deep connection with an exact copy of his acquaintance IRL would only put false impressions in him. He even restrained himself in front of the first woman he copied when he met her after the first dream because he had already developed feelings for her.