I'll go from writing to the actual contents of the novel. Grammar is fairly decent, however, it seems that having Goblins speak in broken sentences has rubbed off of the Author. As such, sentences with either missing words or simply wrong ones occur sporadically. Now onto the novel itself. The premise is fairly interesting. The problem occurs when the Author goes back into the past and then backtracks into the present as it can be quite confusing at times. The characters are very alive unlike in most novels, the only problem I have with them is that they are a bit too forgiving sometimes. It's a decent read.
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