Review Detail of Jnus_Macalalad in THE GAME OF POWER

The story was great. But in my opinion the chapter 1 lacks more details/scenario about the main character. Although the story flows it really well. And based what i read. It looks like it is your first time? Or you have been done several stories? In order to improve your writing skills. Just read and analyze other stories ******* or professional writers. To know more techniques or other type of delivering a stories. Overall I’m very satisfied of what i have been read.