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Review Detail of Kasamplanka in I'm the King Of Technology

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I honestly like reading it but the repetition in the writing is annoying. After 1100 chapters, you can no longer ignore it when the author sais, "one should know...'info dump'...",or "yes,bla bla bla", and the worst of all 6 different paragrpahs after that explaining the same thing with different words. like we get it.You also don't need 4 chapters to explains how a fleet is moving to land with the same exact words used abuot every other fleet and army thats about to fight you don't need 4 chapters for that. Also the "play time is over" comment about obviously people 'fighting' using '30%'of their power then next chapter after that comment, boom 2 paragraphs describing how the 'good guys' absolutely dumpestered the enemy...Then we have the usual grammatical errors still, and ofcourse the plot armour which is, 'fine'. 'Solid' 7/10...maybe

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