Honestly I'm very disappointed in your novel. Its not worth more than half a star but I gave you 1 star because at least you tried it wasn't a good try but you tried none the less.
GodofTruth
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LIKEWell, I recently decided to revamp the story and reboot it. It's now called "A little pride won't hurt nobody" check it out if you're interested if not have a good day to you.
DragonslayerKnight:To clarify that's probably the reason then you should stay over keeping interesting pay and revamping the rest