Review Detail of Nuns in A Glitch In The System(DC)

Enjoyed the initial first chapters because it was an interesting take on the genre. Sentence structure and grammar aren't the best but it gets his message across well enough. Things quickly fell out of wack for me personally as the Story progressed. Story has common issues with the fanfics here, things feel detached and rushed. The main character is your typical over powered guy who is too annoyed and uninterested to do anything outside of his whimsy. We as the audience were never really given a chance to learn much of anything about his growth or experience during his transition from the emotionally damaged man to to most powerful being in the world. First half was about the MC and what he was suppose to be up to for thousands of years and despite it being tens of chapters little was really written outside of he's super strong and anti social. Massive time skip to WWII and we find out he built up kingdoms and destroyed them casually. Next he randomly (premeditated at that) falls in love, then broods over being told to go away only to find out his love at first sight loves him back despite them not really interacting much. Next thing we know he has kids. Come to current age where we have modern dc life and story has shifted to his son being what feels like the main focus, as the MC lurks about not bothered to interfere unless absolutely necessary. His wife and daughter thus far taking on background character status barely being mentioned except for the occasional attempts at comic relief. Currently at 41 chapters and can honestly say I'm not sure who the MC is any more. His son being developed further then his own character has up to this point.